All Comments on 'Caught Ch. 02'

It all moved a bit quickly, but a nice read. Sometimes love does happen rather quickly, but we are conditioned to be wary of impulsive feelings.

Nice story, though it felt a little rushed.

The story is a nice one about two nice people, though it is rushed. One thing I would urge the author to do, is when using real place names, do a little research. Flying from, London to Southampton would mean using more time getting to and from airports, than it would take to ride the train between the two cities, just a little thing that detracts from the story for some.

...why you rushed to the finish line. We knew how their story would end, but I, for one, wanted more of that building, unfurling passion. Still, you gave me my happy ending, so I won't grumble too much! :)

Thank You

Very nice story. I always thought my and my wife’s romance-to-marriage was short but this one has us beaten by a couple of days. I would have liked to have seen a little more to the story, but like I always say, I always do.

Once again, a very nice story. Thanks for sharing.

Lovely story. I like your ‘get on with it’, staccato type style.