All Comments on 'Carol's Very First Spanking'

This must be the best spanking story that I have read. Please share more stories.

Felt like you missed a chance to explore their different feelings, but overall a good story

I do appreciate the critique, thank you. This is one of the first stories I wrote and didn't get into the character structure very well. Please check out some of the others I have posted.

Machu

The author is in a lame position. The character build up reads as if they only met in the near past, but claims that they knew each other and had been friends since they were 10 Y.O. (do the math. They knew each other for 20 years and she just had her 30th birthday....). With that in the foundation, you would think something like "spanking" or previous relationships would be well known issues between them as she has been "besties" with a black man since her mother told her "not to mix with the bucks" (lame saying - again falling on the ancient lexicon of the failed author).

Sorry, couldn't get past the first 5 paragraphs....