by mtnman2003
Brilliant. Half way through I was ready to cum...
and I did before the end.
I don't think that the mother should have been part of the story. It just seemed unnecessary. Otherwise, Great Story!
Originally, I liked the story, minus the tense changes, but when I got to the end I was totally turned off by the mother's reappearance. It bugs me that authors keep slipping extra folks into 'Erotic COUPLINGS', threesomes are not a couple...they belong in 'GROUP sex'