All Comments on 'Body Swap: Fucking Mom'

I understand this is written for the contest (and I gave you five stars), but there should be a full version of this story, as well as a sequel. Think you could do that? Thanks!

That was a fun "quickie."

There wasn’t a twist ending with Mom coming into the room to admonish the daughter for using the same spell as the son.

One thing missing from your story..............STOCKINGS!!!!

As stated - no stockings, nylons, pantyhose, thigh highs... Disappointed - big time.

Lol

Not my only story without stockings...

Also, in 750 words the details go byebye... plus she was woken up in bed.

Jasmine

I only wish there was more.

Well done.

I need to use it on David Kelly the tv producer to gain access to his beauteous spouse who I have been crushing on for 30plus years. Just one time, I swear . Then we can switch back.

Full marks *****

Not your best story. Usually a big fan, not this time.

Hard to think this was written by you. If it wasn't your name attached, wouldn't have read past the first few paragraphs.

Enjoy all you write, Jasmine! I would have thought Dad would have been pleased to awaken and find his younger, longer, thicker, quicker-recovering cock! Tomorrow he'll wake up with his old equipment! Five stars!

Yep, hot, hard, and fast! Just the way ya like it. Five Stars!

Can't wait to see where you take us next! Hopefully, Mommy Dearest will be dressing the part, as well, especially since you love to write about pantyhose! Is there a daughter involved?! Just wondering.

Daddy, Mommy and their son? And all of a sudden Mommy is in full control and wants her husband and son together? That's SO funny I'm STILL laughing. Dad was NOT happy. So he's out. Since he's standing there yelling at his wife I doubt very seriously that his son is going to tap Mommy's ass. This was simply a train wreck. Laughably bad. Don't quit your day job.

1 star

This story deserved so much more developpement :'(

Yes this is by me.

Yes it is short and has no character development.

But remember it was for a contest where the story had to be EXACTLY 750 words... so a very quick romp.

My first version was 1200 words and that had little development. The story was a challenge but forced em to think about word choice.

Jasmine

PS: Dont worry most of my upcoming stories are 8-12000 words. lol

it's supposed to be 750 words. Sheesh get over yourselves. Now to my fave author, as one of the more popular writers on here please suggest no stories under 1500 words to the site admins. I think it's the min for a full on stroke lol

good work you delivered and passed the challenge with flying colors and this was a nice story in of itself since you just don't see bodyswap incest stories much

I loved your story, just proved you can write very erotic stories whether long or short.

Per usual, outstanding story. Had me hard in record time. Thank you.

I think this may have bee the first story I have read of yours that didn't have the woman wearing stockings. Other than that it was a good short story. Totally hot but no detail. But I miss all your usual wonderful detail.

You sure packed a lot in a few words. Poor David's Dad didn't have enough words in the story to think, AND realize he had a young body and bigger cock at his disposal for the rest of the day.

Guess Dad will figure it all out in the 750-word sequel. 😉

I have to say, not your best work. Was super rushed, I normally really love your stuff for all the attention to detail

That's been my fantasy for fifty years, and it never came true. Thanks for the read.

give it a sequel with a twist by having him swap back in the morning, but with his mom!

Nice original concept. I'm not sure how James is going to take his son David fucking his mom every morning in their bed. Maybe Jane can go to David's room every morning to get her fuck?

I am guessing that there will be threesomes for now.

I give it a 3 because its just to short but good enough to earn a few points

Yo I'm ngl I laughed my ass off reading this but it was fucking perfect 5/5

I always wanted a piece of my mom, but I never found that spell. Good short story.

Too bad this was a one and done story. It was truly a good story with all sorts of Possibilities for a few more good chapters. An example would be James finds out that dad was really a submissive. So James Whispered in to mom's ear while he was fucking her the next morning. Let's lock dad's cock in a chastity cage and make him our slave, she thought it was the greatest idea in the world. So the day after James and his mom went to an adult sex store. Mom picked out two metal cages for dad. Even though dad has a good six inch cock, about two inches shorter then mine. The first cage she picked out for daily use was a curved two incher. She said to give him some room for his cock. The second one Scared me, it was flat cage that looks like a silver button small holes around it, both cages had four inch urethra rubber tubes in the center to pee through and to make it impossible to pull his cock out of the cage. I ask mom why the flat cage, she laughed and said I'm going to Shrink his cock down to nothing and dissing him, so I can keep just your big cock. In the back of James' mind he became worried, "what if mom finds another a bigger cock, and decided to Shrink him down to nothing too!!

Wouldn't mind more of this style of story or a Challenge Theme

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