All Comments on 'Birthday at the Hotel Bar'

I enjoyed the plot and agree with your comments in the epilogue. It would be good to see not only a sequel about Sam and Casey, but also about Pam and Wendy (not necessarily in the same story!).

Can't wait to read more chapters of this story. You are a great writer.

Well written, but rather sappy and pedestrian plot. Erotic parts were interesting

What would you have done to improve the plot, without increasing the story's length?

The plot etc was great, you will become better if you keep writing but I really enjoyed this story

Well done!

Nice story.

I liked this tale.

Waiting another chapter.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

...because something very similar happened to me. I just didn't have to fly cross country. So, barmaids and servers take heart, because you never know when someone perfect for you will come along and be smitten by love.

A fine believable romance with nice characters.

another great story, i enjoyed reading it,instead of writing short stories have you ever thought of writing a novel ? i think you have a really good knack for writing.

5*****

Great story! To all the single lonely road warriors out there, may you find a Casey of your own.

Dear Author, Truly enjoyed your sweet love story. Have been there and done that routine of being on the road Sunday afternoon thru Friday night. First class is nice but after a time, would have traded all the perks for being home! Fortunately I had a wonderful woman waiting at home so there could be none of that hanky-panky for me.

Thank you for the story and the escape to the past. Those years are long past but are still fondly remembered. jntiques

Really enjoyed this nifty little story!

Lovable characters in a nicely developed romantic plot made this an outstanding little love story! ~ 5+

It made me think/hope there's hope for me. I just lost my wife of 40 years to Leukemia. Maybe there is life out there... somewhere. Good story, I needed that. Thanks. Always write what your heart tells you.

i like the story, altho not total erotic, it has it high points. more detail would be nice, all i read was Casey has a tuff of dark red pubic hair. maybe let Sam get caught having sex, and the girls getting turned on watching him/them.