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Please write more soon

I'm really liking this so far thank you for writing it!!

Are you an author? This is great. Excellent writing.

Thank you everyone for the kind words! They mean a lot to me (I'm smiling right now as I write this).

These excerpts are part of my first novel, and I've been a little nervous about how well it's going to do when I finish. Will people like it? Have I balanced the sex and the suspense? Does the god of erotica require sacrifices or is a little extra smut enough?

Your praise (and suggestions for improvement!) are welcome. On days when I don't want to write your words keep me going.

I can't thank you enough!

Love the mental insights into your characters. Just enough backstory to tease us into craving more! And we do!