All Comments on 'Be A Good Girl Ch. 01'

This was just fabulous dahling, absolutely fabulous....*drools*

Compared to its sequel, this was relaxed and playful. Wondeful.

A new twist on a scene! Well written, well expressed. Thanks!

I laugh and smile as I read the conversations that occur. There's the conversation between Davy and the master. Between Davy and the author. Of course between master and author. And in her own mind. All of them seem so believable, that I can picture the situation more vividly. It's funny, and tense, which combines to make it sexy and enjoyable to read.

Nicely done!

Dude! This is so cool!

I loved how each character has a different voice. Nicely done. I should take notes.