All Comments on 'BBC Shemale: A Beginning'

So many options and paths to take. Please continue. A wonderful start to this journey. This neighborhood will never be the same!

Yes to all four questions.

Yes, I want more.

Yes to all - I even want to be one of the seduced men!!

Seduce? Well no. But I'd love to see her utterly wreck all the stuck-up britches. Preferably with Frans help. And as for the dp, I'd rather see the neighbor bitch get split between Kimberly and Fran.

Great story as always from you yes to all four questions you should put some rebbca pictures up as well keep writing

I would like to see more alot more.

Need more please

I surely hope not. I'm not into the shemale genre, but I read almost all your stories because you may include my favorite, lesbian sex, which you did, and also because you write well, which this was not. Even topics I don't really get into, you still write well. Except this. This was simply awful, especially for your standards. She can seduce them all in 15 minutes? Utter rubbish. I know it's all fiction, but you usually write plausible stories. This was ridiculous. And you claim to be in a writing slump and need new ideas? Reading this, I'd say you are still in a slump. Here's an idea. Finish stories you already started. Who is the top dog in Two Mistresses? Who wins the daughters in Turning Contest? Does the daughter ever get turned out in Like Mother Like Daughter? Where does Mom go next in Backseat Mommy? You don't need ideas. You already have them. And this, this was a bad one.

They need to be put in their place, hell breed them too for good measure. All of them deserve a chocolate bun in the oven.

I wanted all of them . A very long ertico submissive . Reading while at work your excellent story, definitely makes my day thank you. I can't wait😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Definitely more and I second fhitter's response only I hope I would get a chance to wear the maid's outfit and be of real service!

Would love you to see many more chapters of this storyline

Another great story can't wait for more!!

Well that was unexpected, I mean me liking a story about a shemale that is, but I did and hoping you carry on with the story. I think she may have seduced me.

A five every time......Caz x

As always very well written. I want to see Kimberly do the husbands

I would love to see the rest of the story, and if it takes as long as the Turning Contest to reach a conclusion(yeah, about that?) that would be okay too. As always Great story

I've enjoyed your stories for years! Some I've even tried to convert into reality...with a bit of success. Keep writing erotica for those of us addicted to your stories....please!

An excellent beginning indeed... please keep this one going

It could be a great series. I’d love to see all of your suggestions happening. Maybe impregnate one of the mothers and daughters.

This story has so many potential chapters, can’t wait to read what you come up with. I would love to read about Hamilton getting introduced to the mix with Fran and Kimberly.

To all your questions, esp the pegging..

Getting fucked

I like the pregnancy idea, and seduce whole community

I can read one handed(blush)

much like your protagonists - i want it all...

You have taken the first steps to set up a kingdom in the gated community. Of course, you will be Queen.

Jasmine I would love to see a series like this. It was definitely a great start. I hope to see more

Kim should definitely seduce all those stuck up bitches! and maybe Fran should add some extra revenge and seduce all of Cameron Walters' sons, at the same time to fulfill her gangbang fantasy! ;P

Four yesses, Jasmine. Four answers to your questions. And one request: Please keep the chapters as short as this one. Two to three pages is a quick read, which is my personal preference. I wish I lived in that gated community and would be the friend of both Kim and Fran. Rated this as a 5-star effort but with the reservation stated in the next paragraph.

Your alter-ego in your stories frequently is a high school English teacher. I've always taken that as fact because your writing is generally high quality. But, if that is a fact, I have to wonder who wrote this. Even after some serious editing, this is the most error-riddled effort that I've seen from you. I hope you can improve back to your usual high standards.

All your proposals offered at the end of this chapter promise some highly erotic and arousing sequels. I look forward to reading them. And I hope the quality improves.

In order of the questions you asked...

Yes. I think Fran should have her girl toys as well.

Yes with a double facial.

Yes, Jill (if she’s Fran’s daughter) should be the neighborhood “slut wrangler” for Kimberly and Fran.

Meh, I’m impartial. Pegging doesn’t do much for me.

p.s. buttplugs should be mandatory for all sluts/slave bitches...

Love the way you built everything up. Very eager to see how it goes.

Yes, please, a chapter with husbands being turned out by the attractive new couple in the neighborhood would be very nice!

Yes please continue, all the things on your list looks good. Thank you

I do not know how you do it but you are one of the best

Love your story, a good genesis to a lot of possibilities

until the community is Black Owned.Do not stop here.

All would be good, but as a novel, so we don't have to keep waiting please 😊

I loved it, I want to see a lot more

I want to see all of the above. I loved this story and want to hear about each snobbish housewife being turned into slaves for this BBC!

And turned fully gay. Maybe Hamilton likes to fuck white boys and takes a turn with the husbands.

I think this has to end with Kimberly turning the husbands gay too

Please fuck the husbands too

Your writing is so well paced, the characterization is spot on as ever, thank you

Yes we want a series of turns. All should be available for either Kimberly or Fran.

>Do you want to see Fran get dp'd by Kimberly and Hamilton?

This one.

The rest can come later.

Loved it!! For the next bit, I think its only right since Fran is alone in her home to have the two twins has her live in maids. That would be fun I am sure.

Kimberly should go after the sons, turn them, then when the fathers come to set things "straight" again... she turns them too!

I loved the story, and would love the community to get seduced, Fran to get dp'd, and the husbands to get fucked as well. You're a great writer

So good please proceed

I want to see the whole community get seduced and wouldn't mind seeing fran getting dpd. :) ;)

I want to see Fran get dp'd by Kimberly and Hamilton.

with the snooty neighborhood politics, as well as the hot sex, turnings, and pretty daughters doing the nasties. I can't wait to read your new works.

Write about the husbands the turning/gay seduction is by far your best work can't wait for more

Seduce and breed Fran's daughter. Eventually have all the sluts in the community swelling with black babies... Also finish like mother like daughter

But at least the one who bought the lawsuit on Fran. And bring the husband in so he can get a piece too. He can't be out making all the money and don't get nothing in return.

it would be better and different scenario could be played out, including someone who is stuck up being bend over

Ok I’m hooked. Can I submit to both, wait, all three?

Love those kind of stories.

Goet the husbands in on the action make them fight their wives for her attention

I really like where this is going. This is a fantastic beginning, like all your work. I'd love to see the Fran and Kimberly take on the whole neighborhood. I think it would be great to see Fran get dp'd with the two of them.

After they turn the bitches and daughters into proper sluts, they then get the husbands to be subservient to Kimberly and Fran (With a good sized strap on) next. The husbands get pegged doggie as a daughter is under in a 69, sucking daddies cock. Daughter being eaten by daddy. And when Kimberly fucks and loads any cunt, the husband has to eat the cream pie hen suck Kimberly clean.

Like the first three options.

Very hot story

Love your stories and trust whichever way it goes you will bring it to life amazingly.

THis is an amazing story line and can go any different direction. Anxious for the next story

I also want to see how she turned the 2 she already did

I vote for them doing Josie Winters and her twins

Really great start to a series. Would love to see Kimberly seduce the whole community .keep up your awesome work. Can't wait to see more.

Daughters should get pregnant, too.

Holy fuck, so hot. And I absolutely want all of the above.

Yes to all of the above. A great start to what will be another exciting series.

I can't wait to see where you're going to next! As the title of this comment indicates, my preference is the gal with the twins! This is especially true, if there's Lesbian Incest, involved.

Great start, I would love to see all of the choices. Keep up the great work.

Yes, like others commenting here, I’d really like to see you continue what could be another great series from yourself.

Given a preference, the Mom & twins first!!

More of all listed

Keep the series rolling

Great action....the language is important....makes me horny...xxx

As for you suggestions..please...please...work them all...can’t wait.

John

I'm not much for men being dommed, but I'd love to see the first 3 ideas.

Please make a second one soon I love it so far!!!

I really hope to see more chapters of this story. I want to see all of the scenarios happen. also maybe seduce the sons into not only fucking maybe Kimberly but definitely fran but helping them turn the mothers and fathers into their little sluts and maybe have the sons become one of their mother and fathers masters so they can keep them completely under control and when mommy or daddy needs fucking they can do it. also maybe send the daughters to seduce the fathers that only have daughters and film it and tell them if they do as you tell them the tape won't be released and they can keep fucking the daughters all they want and even swap with other fathers to thoroughly corrupt them. just a few ideas that came to mind

I would like to read more

Jasmine, I truly loved reading this story and hoping you will consider expanding and writing on each of the list above. Turning Josie and her twins would be fantastic and good script for a hot movie.

Your stories are always enjoyable. Thanks

Please keep this one going

you so need to wright the next chapter NOW!!!!!!!

This is one of your best stories yet! (And you have exceptional stories) I absolutely love the relationship between the protagonists: caring and super sexy, cant wait for them to stick it to the rich assholes of the community. Please please please continue the story we all love it!

Do you want to see Kimberly seduce the whole community? HELL YES!!

Do you want to see Fran get dp'd by Kimberly and Hamilton? YES

Do you want to see Jill get involved in some way? Yes please

Really like that story, would love it more to read about the mum and her 2 sons being done together, and the boys feminised and turned into BBC sissies,

I’d love to see all the males and females become BBC lovers and maybe one or two of the males become sissy bois as well I’m sure there’s a club for sissy’s that love BBC

CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT

Your the best

This is so good I would love to see the rest of the community turned into their play toys

Keep going with these stories.

I'd love it if you'd continue with all 3 and more. Looking forward to reading about the community under the thumb of these 2

Being a guy, I'm often conflicted with my obsession for a shemale. I'd never felt attracted to a guy or his cock. Your story however, got me extremely horny. Especially the relationship that was forming between the two women more as lovers than a submissive slut. I'd started imagining myself sucking her cock.

Your stories are well written and have an erotic pull to it than other authors. I hope you keep continuing this great work for us all.

God bless your beautiful mind and those precious fingers!

canT wait for Kimberly to turn the whole stuck up community on their knees worshiping her and her friends pussies and asses, JOE

What a great beginning!! Yes to all of your questions!!

Way to go. Another award winning story by my favorite author. Keep up the great work.

Please all of the above. It will make a great series

Please get the husbands involved

Such a horny opener, yes to all over the above. Can't wait to read about all those snooty bitches begging to be fucked, and their daughters, and their husbands, and their sons too!!

Not sure about your questions. I think if I were writing the next chapter, I would some how turn the tables on Kimberly. I am also a writer, by the way. Not as accomplished as you obviously. So here are my recommendations- Have Kimberly conquer several of the bitches in question. The last bitch she encounters has a Transexual maid that has a bigger cock than Kimberly and they fall for each other. Maybe have Fran in a 3 some with them. Fran hires the sexy Trans maid as a full service live in sex toy. Greatly admire your stories.

Yes to all and Please involve the men / sons into the story..

New to whole Shemale fantasy and found it very exciting. Thanks for the story. Like the idea of making slaves of the mothers and daughters - just not sure I ready for the husbands too, just yet

Please more! More like this, bring the men in too!

I hope there's more to the story. I want to see Kimberly seduce first the whole neighborhood but don't make it easy. I do want to see the men become the bitches as well. Good job!

More please