All Comments on 'Assets and Liabilities'

Great story! Well done! Not what I'm accustomed to reading here and really a nice change! Not just sex but a nice cops-and-robbers tale with just enough sex to make it Literotica-worthy! Five very well deserved stars.

Thank you so much for this exciting story.

Signed:

First time reader. :)

No such thing.

Really enjoyed this erotic crime & suspense roller coaster .... Real characters, real plot - and real fun!

Yes, there are some loose ends ... but its a short story and true to form and no novel.

Looking forward to another one ... or a sequel.

Well done, but you got one thing wrong in the beginning -- Megan's theft of the files on behalf of the FBI was an unlawful search and seizure (the FBI needs a warrant), so the evidence contained in those files could not be used to indict or prosecute DeFazio. It's different if she steals those files on her own accord, and then approaches the FBI or IRS as a whistleblower.

Thanks for the great comments everyone!

This was my first foray into writing a cops and robbers story, and admittedly I did not do a ton of research. I appreciate the technical pointers on where the story was not accurate. But I was more concentrating on the plot and the sex scenes, which I think most people here enjoy more!

These comments though help me to (hopefully) become a better writer, so keep them coming!

M

typical government ploy for any operation. TK U MLJ LV NV

Just another amazing story but such a talented young writer. So much fun to read, I can't wait for the movie to come out of this

Your story was a lot of fun to read, and could be a TV cops & robbers pilot on HBO or some outlet that allows sex. Be you man, woman, or intersex, it makes you want to save Megan's life! I'm sure her rewards for saving her life are worth it, too. Too bad about Anne and Cassidy, but that just helps the drama. Very Law & Order-ish, and that's everyone's favorite program, right? Excellent writing, real tension, and the sex was essential to the story. I'm sure there's something not to like, but I'm damned if I can find it! Five Stars and kudos, JB

You have developed into quite the writer young one, far surpassing my own talents.

Great story.

Thanks for sharing your work with us!

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A great read with a good storyline and strong hot sex scenes. Well worthy of 5 stars or more.

... I loved the story. I really prefer a bit more detail in the sex scenes though. I'm working my way through your catalog of stories.

Your stories would benefit from a good proofreader. That's not a deal breaker for me; just saying...

5 stars

Wow this was amazing. Not too heavy on the sex, plenty of action and all around sexy. This is definitely something I could see being a movie and I'd be first in line on its debut. You are a very talented writer! Definitely one of my favorite authors on Literotica. Keep up the awesome work.

GAAP in this story. The erotica is spicy topping on the flesh of a Meaty crime thriller.

You've got the makings of being another Agatha Christie : Go for It, Albanygal!!!!! Yaaay!!!

This was a great story first, then the sex. Ah the sex. Good job on this. A great read :)

i had fun reading the story, however,...

obviously written from ¨knowledge¨ garnered from tv cops and robbers sillies...

nonetheless, english, grammar, punctuation are good...

admittedly, the author confesses to not having done much research, and it shows...

no handgun aficionado would dream of flicking the cylinder - that is revolver abuse - the frame is weakest in that area - further tv/hollywood...

sex/intimacy is good - there, presumably, author writes from knowledge or research rather than from tv/hollywood.

coooorny!

pretty silly.

i loved the story and gave it 5 stars. The characters were very well developed and the story just flowed. it was very well written. i loved the surprise ending when the maintenance man turned out to be the captain of the police force. Megan sleeping with him at the end of the story was totally perfect. Well done Michelle.

Fantastic read, I was hanging on every paragraph. For some reason Megan sounded lind of familiar. 😊

Great story, could be a movie, Netflix Original???

That was an amazing story. So real. I didnt want to stop. Suspense and great sex too. I loved it. Keep up the good owrk

This story was a thrilling ride, loved the twists, turns, and the spice 🔥