All Comments on 'Allie's Initiation Pt. 01'

i really loved it ! :)

Please write some more ! :-)))))

A sensible well written introduction to a new life style. I really enjoyed how the two character developed. More?

Just beautiful

very well written, this was so exuberating, i was at a loss. holy hell it was hot

Beautiful

Thoroughly enjoyed the two characters

Please send chapter two soon

I agree with the other friends...lovely, tender, erotic. I hope you'll take us along on the lovers' journey.

This is SO much better than any other story of an introduction to BDSM. In so many stories the dominant pushes the submissive in a way that I think would make many run away. To see Valerie letting Allie begin to understand what it means to give up control to someone she trusts is truly beautiful.

Very well written!