by Jay_Lloyd
This is fine writing and is very erotic. At times it is funny too, I love the 'washing machine' scene. Us older women have many desires, and you realise this. You describe events in an unusual and erotic way, and do make them seem believable. My favorite description you give is:
'As I blew out the last of my load I watched her. She was gamely sucking cum back into her throat, although an amount had seeped out of the side of her mouth and was slowly going south. Some dripped onto her big soft breasts, forming a semi-transparent 1 inch circle, which glistened like a jewel as the afternoon sun beamed its illuminating rays upon it. Mrs. K rubbed it into her skin as though it was a precious moisturiser.'
PLEASE write some more chapters soon, I want to hear about them having a threesome.
love Cathy
I am glad you have continued these storiesand look forward to them carrying on, just hope we don't have to wait so long before the next instalment
You would be better off without the son in the story
But keep up with the story .
you should change it from mature to incest with the son in the story.