All Comments on 'A Vampire's Tale'

This is a great story I hope to see it continue. I liked the gental and rough sides of Adam. Please give us more...

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it was sooo good i wannna read more keep writtin plzzz

As a avid vamp reader/writer/RPer, I can say I really did enjoy this. But Eric seems like he has a lot more going for him the Chase. Mortal... vampire... mortal.. vampire... Yeah, vampire trumps every time. The female was a little milktoast. I hope she finds A. a spine and B. an appreciation for her vampiric nature. There are also a few errors that knocked me on my ass while reading and I was like... 'wait, what?' Just might want to think about an editor. I am not exactly criticizing, as I liked the erotic aspect and scenes, but if there is a part 2, I wouldn't object to seeing a bit of fight. All in all, well done.

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I like this story write more pease

Playing continue the story

I've never really been into the whole "vampire" thing. Which is why I am surprised that I really like this story. I hope you add more chapters to this story.