All Comments on 'A Sister Surprise: Drunk Mommy'

How do you make the pictures?

Thank you, dear Jasmine, and congratulations for the nice dreams you provide for your readers.

Some domination, interweaved with tenderness ....

And it seems I'm the first to read this one ! Fun.

Brussels Chuck.

Loved it! Super fucking hot!!

Silky J...Damn sexy story...great illustrations..love your legs in black thigh highs...and your ass looks so hot....nice cock too.....love your perverted mind and body..

xoxo

Thank you for a great series of stories. Then pics are good and they left little to the imagination. You always hit a home run. I cant wait for the next series.

you have done it again, thanks, Peter

Another fantastic story. The way the mother caught was great. Keep up the great work. Hope you bring the head cheerleader into the mix, it would strike close to home.

Great story.

Your stories used to be really enjoyable... then came these abominable illustrations. They look like posed sex dolls, except hideously “cartoony”. They’re no substitute for your writing talents telling the story. Use your well known descriptive talents, not props... and especially not these. Just sayin.

Loved it! Five stars! What guy wouldn't want an FFM! Very hot!

The illustrations are funny, instead of erotic.

The pace between the pictures felt off at page 3. I'm nitpicking a bit here, sorry.

I love the serie, it's a bit sad it ended, want a bit more from it, like how their mom adapt to her new mommy-slut life ( and we didn't get an anal scen with her).

I do understand why though, it's called " a sister surprise" for a reason after all, if Sarah is not in the story what is the point ?

Thank you again for a great story!

I really enjoyed the first segment of the series, but thought it steadily went downhill from there with each successive chapter being less than the preceding one(s).

Love all your stories.. . Please post more soon. I cant wait for the next one..

from my favorite author.

I doubt there are more than a few super stars who can have so many orgasms in a 24-hour period (men, that is!). Even with another girl to relieve me for a rest break, I'd be in for a rather sore pussy after all that fucking, even using lube. It's a lovely fantasy, though!

For the next one, maybe have him dominate his friend eve and maybe her mother

So wonderfully illustrated with graphic dialogue! Truly an OMG story!

A brilliant series of stories, the illustrations really did enhance things.

Well worth more than 5 Stars.

Rapier

Totally fucking depraved and fucked up, lucky fucker. Oh what would I not give to be the hard rampant cock in this threesome, I adore cunt eating it and fucking it over and over till we are all totally fucked up and blissed out. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

This was so hot I can hardly handle it. Love the series and wish it would continue. Sarah does still need cum in her ass after all. I would love for Joey to lay the ground rules for his his ladies wearing stockings and serving him as submissive pets.

Non stop action. Hot! You sure know how to keep my attention.

You definitely know how to tell a story

Thank you for the “Famtasies”

wow...your really good at this....you get me sooo hard....love the subject...the stories..and illustrations..congrats..job well done..hardon material for sure

What HAPPENED about Jane?

I hope you continue the episodes.

One of the very BEST SERIES

You did such an erotic job creating the characters and their sexuality.

Lucky Joey, lucky Sarah and Mom.

A totally hot sex filled story.

WELL, I'M SAD TO SEE AN END TO THIS GOOD STORY BECAUSE I WOULD HAVE LOVED TO HAVE SEEN A FUTURE FOR THE SIBLINGS, SARAH AND JOEY. I REALLY THOUGHT JOEY'S LOVE FOR HIS SISTER COULD HAVE TURNED SARAH'S LUST FOR HIS DICK INTO A REAL LOVE RELATIONSHIP, OTHER THAN SISTERLY. I THOUGHT THE STORY WAS GOOD, BUT IT COULD GO FURTHER.

Well written , and the graphics were coil! Have you considered making this into an adult video game? I'd be playing it all the time.

I read this before fucking my girlfriend. It got me so hard! Continue series please!!

Hated to see this series end. Lots of potential for sequels. One I would love to read is Sarah and Mom pregnant and the long term family dynamics. Keep on writing your great stimulaing stories.

What happens when Jane finds out?

Your imagination is weird and depraved, and I love you.

WTF...

Your mind is a fertile joy of lusty rawness in print! Thank you

Yes, Yes , Yes - What a great Series it would be nice for another couple of instalment where Joey really takes on the DOM role both at home and at school and even when he moves off to College.

You once again showed the others how its done. Keep up the great work.

Always a pleasure to read your debauchery

Nobody does it better!

It adds to the erotism of your fantastic chapters.

I am sorry to see the story line end.

I will miss Sarah and Jane.

𝓘𝓷𝓬𝓻𝓮𝓭𝓲𝓫𝓵𝓮 𝓐𝓻𝓽 , 𝓘 𝓵𝓸𝓿𝓮 𝓲𝓽 ❤

Très bonne série incestueuses.

Stories great - Illustrations detract

The first one was really hot. It had real promise. The second much less so, and it went downhill from there. With those silly pictures, the thing removed humanity from the scene and became some sort of strange Japanese comic book. Sorry, but you usually are much better.

Sorry it’s a four star for me because I don’t like the illustrations.

You should do another installment I'm sure we would all enjoy it.

This is the perfect end to a totally sensuous story. You have a gift for the sensuoisly beautiful stories. The incestuous nature of this only adds extra passion to your concluding chapter.

I can't wait for your next story.

The threehg stories like a Trilogy made a good horny story. Oh and first I’ve read here with pictures or illustrations I think they really added it very well. Good job 👍🏻

Would love to see a follow up and keep this one going.

This has to be my favorite series and this story the best! I love the illustrations!

great series. love this author.

very great story, you kept the characters fun and exciting, the banter between Joey and Sarah was fun and enjoyable. the details were perfect not too much.

I was and still am hoping you did/will write Joey going to Sarah college and with special permission being let into Sarah's sorority, along with Jane. That way he can service all of Sarah's sisters Jane and even his mom on weekends. just an idea

very enjoyable Thank you

Absolutely loved it the playfulness of mom and daughter teasing was great . Very sensual and well put together :)

What a fuck feast! Love the graphics and scrip - would be an 'interesting movie!'

Tiresome.

this series has been absoluteyl incredible. i am blown away1 thank you, thank you, thank you!!!

Great series!!!

LOVED THE WHOLE SERIES!! You should write a few more though...1) First week alone just him and his mother, plus Sarah returning for the weekend. 2) Going to school with Jane as his girlfriend now, more of them screwing and the other cheerleaders wanting some...making Sarah a bit jealous. 3) Maybe another visit to the college to see his sister and to get a college tour (since that's where he said he was going to go now) and screwing the sorority members as they all line up to try him out (also making Sarah jealous). 4) A Christmas thru New Year sex-a-thon while all 3 are home, could include Jane joining to make it a 4-some. Just some personal thoughts.

To this person who commented last this story has run its course it went down hill when brought in the other girls that wasn't family once that happened there was no way to fix it he took a decent fantasy story and ruined it by trying to extend the fantasy in to a harem and then all the disrespecting of the women that was involved from the start it was doomed to fail from the first story cause those things alone

@Mfkndragon, rubbish, and please use punctuation....

Brother and sister are good, but mom too is amazing. Thanks!

Great job, thanks for sharing.

So so hot to read how a true sexual family came together to explore the primal wants

This is one of the best porn stories I have ever read. And that some doing! I am 84 years old and was married to a very sexy women for 62 years. I'm missing her dearly!!

Thanks for a stimulating story. Nice to see the mom is rekindling her youth. I never thought or believed that girls were so sexual in high school or college. Male/female sex yes but female/female action completely escaped me if it actually occurred.

Still graphics ruin rather than enhance.

Bill S.

Wow!! You are without a doubt the sexiest writer ever. Would love to meet you in person 😊

Great story, but I would have liked if Mom wasn’t so easy to convince

Without a doubt one of the most talented writers on this site

Eh.

Bill S.

Hope there is more to come!!

Great Story! Hope there is more to cum! A chapter about Sarah's first weekend back home? Joey training his mom before Sarah returns with a sorority sister and Jane bobbing in and out? The old cheer coach doing their mom? Throw in some weight gain for mom and maybe pregnancy? So many possibilities!

I'm going to be honest here, I love your stories and even this series is good, but I am definitely not a fan of the illustrated stuff. I'd much rather just a full on text story. The pictures are just too distracting and unnecessary

I'm so sick of these stories that make the size of the cock the main focus and giving the guy a super power. There's no human way possible for a guy to cum that many times, even if he's young or on a bottle of viagra. Staying hard is one thing but he'd be shooting blanks at some point.

I had just quit reading a story after they turned an incest story into cheating. Eventhough I was disappointed in parts of this story it was interesting until you had mom confess how much of a used sex slave she allowed herself to be, I did the math and it was sickening how many pussies she munched plus in 4 years of college she fucked and sucked more dick than a sex worker would do in a life time.

I finished reading eventhough. I was glad you stopped talking about his stocking fetish and toe sucking. I wanted to give it a low star rating because the lack of cuming inside, especially sisters anal. The fact you made fun of baptism was upsetting, then mom took it down her throat and they didn't make a big deal about her being their mommy slut for life.

Also forgot to mention I love the illustrations except in my opinion you made the sister with big hair and glasses and mom a younger looking person. It should be the opposite and personally I'm turned off when girls are over the top with sexuality, guys too...

Loved the NICE pictures

U have done VERY well !

lucky fuckers

I really like the deleted scenes and the commentary behind them. 5/5

Nato€

To Silkstockingslover: absolutely love your work always makes me and my husband horny and ready for a long night of sex.

To Time4Luv: why so sick of the thick cock? Have you ever felt anything like that? Deliciously spreading your walls and feeling so full? From first hand experience I can tell you, it's a game changer. The first time my husband then my boyfriend at the time, and I had sex, I thought I was a born again virgin minus the hymen. I'm a redhead and have a high threshold for pain, but that first time, we had to switch from missionary to doggy, and even then it was a challenge. If having a thick cock is a super power, then my husband is definitively a super hero. My super hero, and when we found our rhythm the rest is history. Plus the amount of pleasure he gives me, I broke from tradition, and asked him to marry me. So don't go posting a toxic opinion. Are you jealous? Or is it because you're lacking in a certain department? Size is everything. I'd rather have a fat cucumber my husband than my ex's #2 pencil any day of forever and twice on Sunday. Good day to you

Some serious athletics depicted here

My god, loved it. Reminded me of a weekend home with my sister when I was 19, ( she was 21 ) we ended up fucking most of the weekend while our parents where away for their anniversary.

It was a great story jerkedoff the whole time your stories make me very horny

The pictures are somewhat disappointing - unrealistic stick-insect style and not very sexy. A manual artist would probably do better.

The story is a bit long and repetitive.

Sorry to say, but those pictures doesn't work for me, quite the opposite

I agree with some of the other comments that the stiff stick-like illustrations don't work for me either. They're a distraction, and pull me out of the story (they're pale compared to the emotional imagination derived from good writing - even if the author is getting fulfillment from projecting herself into the story, as all of the nylon covered legs in the illustrations look like the author's legs in her avatar - kinda hot). And the same holds true for all of the endless gymnastic sexual positions in the last two stories of this series. The story loses its erotic and emotional impact (which the author is so good at). It becomes too diluted and superficial, becoming mere physical gymnastics without the erotic heat. Variety is good, but sometimes less is more! For me the first story in this series is the best. The author is so good with the erotic build-up and the juicy payoff, with hot descriptive sex and dialogue. The reader becomes emotional involved with the characters and their ultimate fulfillment. I was looking forward to the mother joining in, but the emotional mother-son bond was missing, so it could have been anyone... Anyway, I'm a big fan of many of your stories, and I hope my constructive criticism isn't offensive.

I agree that the pictures distract from the story. You are so talented with words that my mental images are far more erotic than the less than realistic pictures. The only other criticism I might offer is that--especially in this final section--the positions seem overdone: gymnastics dwarfing sex. These are two personal opinions in an otherwise highly positive comment on the whole series. One suggestion: it might be a really erotic story to put Sarah and Joey together as roommates....maybe while in college.

Loved this series! Great story and well written! Do wished that there was a couple more chapters though. 5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!

Was this even written by the same person that used this account years ago? Why are the stories in this category lately becoming about domination with humiliation and calling the women sluts and hateful names during sex? Some of us actually like women and that kind of talk is not erotic in any sense. Another really big fail is when everybody describes each detail of what they're doing during sex as a way of telling the reader the story. That is comically bad writing since people don't do that for real. The computer illustrations are a really awful style too. They are a distraction at best and repugnant at worst when the figures look like cartoon zombie robots in certain poses. 2/5

Fives!!! ☆

The illustrations definitely enhances the erotic value of your stories, even though you are a good writer by yourself. Don't listen to the nitpickers. These are after all fantasy stories where anything goes. No need to be overly realistic. Keep up the good work. 5 stars!!

cartoonish

Excellent

This whole story series was great. Would love to read more series to the story.

Wow, ! fantastic, oved the story and the drawings

WOW!

What a story. Great pictures too.

Would have loved to be the one to do this in real life myself.

Amazing story!! Would LOVE another chapter to follow up on his new girlfriend.

You are one amazing woman! Have experienced a similar experience? I wouldn't mind sticking my tongue in your pussy. These stories drive me nuts. Great writing. 5 stars. I k

Love silk stock stockings. Keep writing. You are a professional!!!

I ABSOLUTELY LUV YOUR STORIES & IN MY OPINION, I ENJOY THE ILLUSTRATIONS!!!!! I LUV YOU & YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!

Didn't like the drawings. Took away from the story.