All Comments on 'A Roll of the Dice'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
erotic couplings?

If I wanted to read about chastity belts and denial or femdom, I'd be reading in the

fetish section. Why not throw in her fucking someone else next so you can round it off with a nice bit of cuckolding.

Paperweight123Paperweight123over 4 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous

That's a reasonable point. I thought it was "vanilla" enough to go here, but I recognize not everyone will agree. It's my first submission; I'm sure I'll get better at categorizing as I go along.

Duke567Duke567over 4 years ago

Good story. The ending cleared up some of the confusion I had at the beginning (I'm guessing that was intentional). A few editorial errors, but overall a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Loved it. Nice slow tease. The chastity cage is a nice touch.

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My writing focuses generally on what I like to read: sensual, consensual, power exchange, with a heavy tilt toward orgasm control/denial. You're unlikely to find significant pain play in my stories, or anything that would suggest non-consensual sex or coercion beyond what the ...