by Many Feathers
your concept is very good, you have a good imagination and much talent in telling a tale. please pursue this story and continue the great work, i look forward to the next installment, galen
Keep the good stories coming!!!! You Are One Great Writer of Erotic stories just makes you want to keep reading.Thanks
The reason for that is; that there is a very solid story here,with great writing along with the author's ability to be a excellent story teller.
I so hope that you continue with this very good story, thanks
Cant wait to see what is Added to Brian after being struck a second time maybe it will be easier for him to Read Minds and not "lose" the ability.
it will also be nice to see if his Lady Friends come and see him to Stay and "help" him to Recover.
What a wonderful surprise. Great story, well written with smooth build ups to the sex scenes. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Thanks for sharing.
Looking forward to the next installment, if there is one.
Thanks again.
Great writing and character development. The sexual build up was intense. I can't wait for more.
That guy had lot of fun..wish i had that kind of "spark" thing
towards the end i nearly creamed myself without even unzipping, this story was excellently written and has alot of potential, keep it up!
An interesting story. I have enjoyed the premise and am looking forward to more....
Writing style...nearly cost a star...yet, I give you Five Stars(π π π π π ππππππ―) because the whole premise works so well.
I especially like the mutual masturbation idea; we all have things we like, AND I LIKE THIS!! The whole emotional attachments behind this kind of sharing, the TRUST!! So Nice.
Now, let us see how his second encounter with β‘ lightning affects his life!!