by silkstockingslover
In my opinion it would have been better without the pics. Having said that I do enjoy reading your stories.
I actually like the illustrations, though the cartoon illustrations of some of your lesbian stories are better. However, these were good illustrations for this quick story.
It was OK. Maybe even good, for somebody else. But having read many of your stories I gotta say, its not what I expect from you. Far from your best effort.
Is it a video game, like a raunchy version of something like The Sims? I'd really like to know.
As for the presence of the images, I'm in the camp of those who think they add to the story.
This is a wonderful first story! Hot, sexy and raunchy! More please! Love the thought that this mom gets into so many more naughty scenes! Can't wait!
Pretty good story. Have another story line suggestion. What if mom's boss comes back in and catches them in the act!
Like a lot of your stories lately, there is no lead-in to the sex. A couple of paragraphs of setup and then "...knees, mother" or "...knees Joan".
Please don't get me wrong. I love your stories and anxiously look forward to new releases from you. You are one of my favorite writers. It's that you rush right into the sex lately. I miss the setup you had with stories like Mom Submission or What Mom Doesn't Know Will Fuck Her
Not a bad story, pretty good start, keep going but the art/ illustrations leave a lot to be desired...
Daughter makes three but this time i would like to see the change of the son and mother dominating the daughter
The story line was good but the illustrations were not up to your usual high standard
Any of your suggestions for a sequel would be good
wow what a great start now I am just waiting for lots more of this series . what a great writer you love most of your stories keep up the great work and good luck with the comp.
Your mommy-slut stories always have potential. Since we have only met 3 characters, there is defnitely room to introduce more people into Amy's new life. For me, definitely mixing in the daughter (or Nicole) has great potential. LOVE all your stuff, keep on writing| and keeping your illustrators busy!
It was, as usual, a great story but I have to agree that the pictures were not as good as usual. It does not matter which one you decide or do them all and make it a series. They will all be amazing. What about since you mentioned Lesbian if somehow Nichole seduces the daughter then to get Nichole to stop touching her daughter She submits to Nichole and when the son walks in and catches them he ends up dominating them both. Then add another guy and re-add the daughter to the mix.
MORE! In fact, I think that it would be a good idea to have about FOUR sequels to this! How about - instead of a daughter or another son - what do you think of her "long lost sister's" kids - caught by a niece and nephew? This part sounds much more like Landon is an only child...
My wish is that he fucks his Mommy- Slut Real Hard in her Hot ass and really see her go wild.
I'm casting my vote for "A Mommy-Slut: An Anal Ass Training" -- thanks for yet another great story.
I love the idea of having Nicole find out and blackmail her!
Hi all
Thanks for the comments good and bad.
This was my first time doing my own artwork and I guess it wasn't as good as i hoped.
I am working on a couple others (Daughter's Initiation into Incest 2 and A Sibling Surprise 2) which I hope are better.
Jasmine October 2016
You get me so horny! Great writing and good pics. You are now in my fantasies.
More, Peter
I love how you often include discovery and shock in your stories, and power exchange. The discovery and reaction is always so interesting and exciting. I'd like to see read more and Nicole strikes me as a character with great potential. The illustrations were a nice touch. Thank you
Always another outstanding story. There is a reason your stories are my first 'go-to' on the site. And I just keep coming back.
sometimes really enjoy your writing but the buildup was just nonexistent here. personal preference for me I suppose. Have a good one
It was weird seeing the pics of the son wearing only a shirt, tie and uniform jacket...with sandals on his bare feet. He wouldn't have been wearing sandals with a uniform. Did he take off his pants, shoes and socks and put on sandals? Even when he finally got naked, he kept wearing the sandals, although mom managed to lose her shoes along the way.
Great Story,
Cannot wait to find out what happens when Nicole sees the video tape and confronts Amy.
Another great story. As always you had me very hot and jealous. I hope you will write more stories to follow up on this one.
love you for all the great pleasure you have given me.
Yes please let us know more about mommy slut,she could have some many adventures
It was not witty or funny. The rest of the dialoguecould have been pasted from one of your many other stories on the exact same topic. 2 stars.
I like your ideas for continuing story lines. I always check for your new submissions (pun intended).
I have see you write better, but I enjoy all of your work, this one was hot but I thought it lacked in suspense when landon got caught. the story went for two paragraghs before she interrupted Nicole, and could have easily had them face the music the next day, in a similar erotic way.
I vote to definitely add daughter. Hell, why not all of the above as chapters.
By all means, please keep going. There are so many possibilities open to you.
I like the idea of amy getting blackmailed but i think nicol getting blackmailed would be better so amy can put her bitch of a boss in her place.
Great story and amazing artwork - by all means let's blackmail Amy - we have the perfect setup with a 40 something married librarian here. The things we can make her do to keep keep clueless hubby, well, clueless (for now)...
Hot, Hot, and did I say Hot?! Here is a recommendation for another story. A Mommy-Slut blackmails her boss and uses her to pleasure herself and her new found son-lover.
Sorry, story was great, but the graphics are YUK
Story was great, graphics need more. Less background, more of the people? We understand it is in the library office. I hoped to see more detail of the people in the graphics....details in boobs, pubic areas of both makes & females. Does that help?
By the way, great ideas for follow-up stories. I'll look forward to seeing them soon!
Hot story - 5 stars.
Since this is an incest story I would suggest adding the daughter in the next chapter. Keep it in the family!
Mom and son try to keep their incest a secret but they are eventually caught by daughter who can't believe how big her brother's cock is.
Love the dirty talk. The more depraved the better. Keep it cuming mommy!
Fantastic story, I would be pleased to read all of the sequels, start with the lezdom thank you .
I think every guy has a Mommy fetish, and this was no exception. I would like to see you expand on all the titles that you mentioned above at the end of the story. Happy writing and Thanks again for this one!!
Analysis ass sout & Mommy makes three are two I would love to read. As for the lezzie story, son blackmail mom would be a great line. Force mom down on one of his other sluts. I couldn't see him submitting to the head librarian. Make her go down on mom while he pounds her, yes.
Loved it. More please. Love to see the son make the mother and boss submit together. Perhaps a dual spanking for interrupting his Halloween fun.
A great story hope you keep writing about the 2 of them (and other family members)
Loved your story.. Only wish I was the one riding you only I would have not been able to hold back and shot my load right into your lovely cunt.
More stories like this one please.
Mike
Hey I've always liked your stories and now there are pictures! amazing seriously!
I'd like to vote for A Mommy-Slut: Daughter Makes Three.
Thank you so much for all the writing and keep on doing it!
Would love to read Mommy-slut: An Anal Ass Training 😈 love that rear entrance hole😋
I really liked your story, it was sexy as hell and had me horny the whole way through. My wet cunt can't help but love it! I vote for DP by sons.
The Librarian came back and joined in with mommy slut and the pilot
Please oh please don't stop now I really want and need some more of this?!
THE SLY RN HAS ACCUMULATED A PLETHORA OF VARIOUS CONCOCTIONS . 1. A VAST SUPPLY OF VIAGRA,CIALIS,LEVITRA, d-AMPHETAMINES,BARBITURATES,DEMEROL,MDMA,ROHYPNOL, COCAINE HYDROCHLORIDE, CAVERJECT, AND OTHERS CERTAIN TO BRING THE BOY AROUND TO HER WAY OF THINKING. SHE ADMINISTERED THE CIALIS IN MASSIVE AMOUNTS. THE SECONAL AND THE COCAINE GOT THE BOY ADDICTED AND NEEDING MOM TO GIVE MORE. SHE GAVE MORE ALL RIGHT!
Please do go on, making her a live in sex toy and her own boss personal pussy lapper
Greatest incest story ever written Kodos! I am ready for the sequel and make it worthwhile the wait. Thanks a LOT.
I’d like to have a prequel. How does Nicole become a slut for the kid?
I love the idea of all the possible sequels to this they all sound so hot
Want to see what he has planned for the slut at home, will she be kept nearly or completely nude. Will he share with others? Always love where you take stories.
Yes write more and have momy slut and son totally dominate nicole and have son impregnate both mommy and nicole
I found your story interesting and illustrations put more into it. The sex organs need work... her pussy was nonexistent and his dick was skinny. Give him a little more girth and don’t be afraid to show her snatch... Other than that, nice work.
I've always been a big fan of yours silk. Love your stories. Will connect with you on twitter.
Keep writing and teasing.
I keep looking for any of you aforementioned possible sequels. Please continue...
It was written well and it got me so horny and I cam very hard. I like your writing style, as I've read so many stories over the years. Maybe, her son can bang Mommy real slow until near the end when he bangs her hot wet pussy hard and she screams when his hot cum is squirting inside. Thank you again . . .
Story was ok, but not as erotic as many. I also liked the illustrations by Stephanie more than the ones in this story.
Crossing the taboo line as you have written, was wonderfully sensual. Since the Mom was extra horny and the son loving as many sexual adventures as possible. It seems only natural for this event to occur.
Question: What happened to the boss? Could she become part of a future threesome?
Just curious.
Well written as always.
The ending was particularly special. Loved that the mom masterbated for the son. Watching a female get off is always hot for me. This story is just beginning-please take it further. Thanks.
Not good. Simplistic with little depth of characters. Not really too hot.
Bill S.
A good story slightly ruined I felt by all the stupid jokes. They were unnecessary and distracting. Also the size of the son's cock in the pictures did not match up to its description. It looked distinctly average and skinny. Get on the same page as your illustrator.
I reread this story and still think it's wonderfully sensual. Any chance for a sequel?
Just wondeing.
Very erotic. I like incest stories bereft of guilt complex. After all it's a fantasy, right? No one's asking for realism in Literotica. Definitely 5 stars!!! And a lot has to be said about the illustrations. They definitely enhance the erotic value of the story. I like your illustrations. Especially the backgrounds like book shelves, designs of the couches and tables are very meticulous in their details. Though the protagonists do not display such details and their couplings are left to our imagination, also they are totally expressionless, their erotic value can be enhanced by two things: 1) show the fuckings in more detail, 2) bring in expressions to their features befitting the particular scene or action. One other thing, Jasmine, Landon's cock, as depicted in the illustrations, is surely not that impressive as described by his mother. It is neither that long nor that thick. Even I have a better one than that. Please explain this anomaly to your illustrators.
Great story I do not like the DP idea. I do like the idea of him taking the bitch home to mommy and recording the whole tryst to hold her to silence. Keep writing, please.