by AnnaVenus69
Finally! Glad to see chapter 2 finally posted! Honey...this indeed has been fun writing this story with you. Am very anxious to see how the readers respond and enjoy this exciting and fascinating little journey with us.
Love you Heart Keeper!
you and Many Feathers seem to have a nice partnership going in Many Ways LOL! Very enjoyable read Anna, looking forward to the next chaper. Wonder who'll be writing it, too! (xxx)
I need to make a 911 emergency call to my man after reading this!!! Great job Anna, you and Many Feathers make a great team..I don't care who writes the next chapter but somebody needs to get busy typing
Very good story! You two really did a nice job. But someone needs to do Chapter 3. Poor Linda REALLY needs a good fucking!
so wonderful to see your writing Anna!! what a wonderful complement to RL!! I love this collaboration and was so anxious to get to chapt 3, i almost neglected leaving a comment!!
The contrasts between the style and approach of these two authors makes this a great collaboration and I hope this is but the first of many dual-authored stories.
Great work!
Loved chapter 1 and chapter 2 keeps the same pleasurable tempo going nicely!
WOW, nice pacing, well written extremely hot all the way through. Very well done.
How good canit get for a woman to write so boldy and clearly the feeling so sex. Great.