by Jjonest
This is a beautiful mix of horror and eroticism. I especially like that it leaves you with a tingle of the horror to last beyond the ending.
This was a really fun bit of erotic horror. The setting and eerie atmosphere were really well rendered. I enjoyed the gradual development of hauntings. Also, I thought forcing them to give up their secrets to the group was successfully erotic. Nice work delivering some spooky twists all the way to the end!
Bravo! Very well constructed and darn near flawless writing. This belongs in the finals.