All Comments on 'A First Time to Remember Ch. 01'

Ahh.. I love a happy ending/beginning.

And I'm pretty sure this is the first story I've

read where the father didn't turn out to be an

asshole. Which is refreshing turn of events.

A few errors in spelling, grammar, & punctuation. That said, I am hereby volunteering to be the editor, as I see no reason for this not to be a series. (Suggestion: Maybe father dies, & they reconnect at funeral.)

1] I see nothing about his father mentioning another child.

2] That said/written, a year later, am wishing-for/imagining a continuation of their stories/relationship.

Would like to see more stories about these two.

This is great. Is Click Click Click a retelling of this story?

she looks like a fucking cow, tits hang past her navel. D tits droop IF they are natural. I prefer B&C tits, and A over D. FLAT chested over fake. I also want a WOMAN not a shaved pussy looking like a 8 year old. OK just my preferences...But an excellent story...

FF tits, really. They would be hanging around her knees. Dream on.

Too repetitious. Two stars.

Loved the story, well done!

So messy and rushed, you can’t get to truly know people long distance, and suddenly the father is all loving and understanding? I don’t buy that at all, he was depicted as a hardcore businessman, and what does a businessman care most about? His possessions, the trophy wife is on the top of the list, and he is supposed to just bless them?

And as some else mentioned, very repetitive.