All Comments on 'A Fantasy Cums True Ch. 01'

Please continue

Let's see where you take us...and the characters.

YOU HAVE A GOOD STORY BUT I JUST COULDN'T GET INTO THE BAD ASS CHARACTER. I THINK IT MORE LIKELY THEM, WIFE WOULD HAVE BEEN NEEDING TENDER TREATMENT, EVEN IF FOR ONLY ONE NIGHT.

Contrary to the one comment, the woman's response is entirely plausible.

Elegant sluts are a wonder to behold.

soon after giving birth? Possible? Sure. Probable? Hell no, I'm afraid. Maybe with multiple encounters, but the first one wouldn't do it. Other than that nail-meet-chalkboard bit, it was a very steamy story. Nice use of adverbs and adjectives.

-Anubelore :)

So good....

Wheres the rest of it please?

I hope the next parts to this series is as HOT as the first!! Thanks for sharing.