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But it runs on a track of explanation

There is a poetic stage that I got whacked with a lot when I first started writing, show don’t tell...And it’s one of the hardest things to manage when writing poetry, conveying the feeling with the imagery, I’m still not very good at it

I can give you some examples if you like using this writin as a template, or I can shut up and leave you to it :)

Would love feedback, and some insight. Where can I see your samples? And I have 4 pending that are more my style. This was more of a free thought. Thank you for the comment!