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by DanielaRo

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
I liked it

But dislike words like cuz. Like words like shant. A generational thing, I guess

DanielaRoDanielaRoover 10 years agoAuthor

@Oldbear63 I share your opinion on cuz :) changed them already but will have to edit the poem. I used words like as when or just removed the cuz..

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