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by chatterley_lady
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Anonymousalmost 3 years agoWell done! I love the way you effectively set up stark contrasts in the poem, between Heads and Tails.
Maydaypilotalmost 3 years agoThe last line makes this just right. “Light a match and let me burn.” 5 star first submission!
PBAnnieover 2 years agoThat was a great first submission. Actually, it was a great submission whether it was your first or fifty-first. Keep them coming.
Anonymousover 2 years agoExcellent first work! I wasn't convinced that head should have been first as I read through tails. But that last line certainly erased any doubt. Five stars amazing! I hope we see more from you.
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