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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Piss a tor

too dense and boring, no body wants to hear about the resurrection of a soft cock

legerdemerlegerdemerover 6 years ago
It's about the journey

A lovely piece, Piscator, in its simplicity describing the journey we all go on: settling to listen to the rhythm of our bodies and hear the music they will make together if we only let them. Nicely said- in a quiet yet earnest voice, some disconcerting undertones that add tension, then continuing the rise to the climax. I love the title and its double meaning. Well done- 5*

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
THERE IS THERE HERE AND THERE

but whom is what and whyfore, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
lots of killer lines

though I feel a prosy-casual-stroll vibe from the whole

which I happen to appreciate and enjoy

- enjoyment + a touch of (needed) inspiration.

Not a bad way to spend a mid-morning,

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