All Comments on 'The Perv and my Panties'

I know a few men like this. Lol

This one is so deliciously wicked!

and played subtley for both, TK U MLJ LV NV

Have to show this to another friend of mine who loves your poetry too. Well written!

I see the camera, but I don't care,

I'm glad to know you are aware.

I put your panties up to my face

Wanting to be in that place.

That place they do cover -

Where I want to hover!

You lying back on the bed

Your lovely legs so widely spread!

My head 'tween your thighs,

I look in your eyes.

I see your desire,

Your are so on fire.

I move in for a taste,

Not one drop to waste!

I inhale your aroma,

I'm not in a coma.

My tongue pops out,

There is no doubt!

It's a point not to belabor.,

What I really want is to savor your flavor!

Kiss on your cunt!

Hot and erotic. 5 Stars.

You are a sick girl, Brittni!! Keep these poems coming!! :)

Really erotic, naughty poem. My favorite part was: "Now I am tired, asleep in my bed,

You deny that my panties, play with your head?

You think you are sly, but you’ve got some nerve,

I’ve recorded it all, my panty-loving perv."

Reminds me of some of the things I've done... if only I could jizz into your panties... Keep up the great work, you are really talented.

I'm a perfectionist, so I'll say that I missed the scansion in a few places, but the imagery was good and the relationship and the lack of a meeting between the two keeps it wonderfully tense. I half want you to burst the bubble at the end by making her discover him, threaten to punish him and then offer herself to him for their mutual pleasure instead.

Oh Ms Brittni how you're able to capture what most men do or have done over their lives. You describe in such detail what most of us already know and, yes young lady, it has exactly the same affect! Thanks for sharing with us that at least some of you know!

As I panty-loving, married (& closeted) bi guy I got so much out of this poem. My wife has cheated on me (on extremely rare occasions) and to once (unbeknownst to her) find evidence of her cheating in her panties was incredibly arousing. And, on the equally rare occasions when it’s my turn to to enjoy some extramarital cock, her panties (from the day before) have sometimes featured (also unbeknownst to her). Sometimes the guy fucking me enjoys my little kinky fetish, other times I’ve had guys who’ve been turned off by her leftover juices.

Very hot. Simplistic and all too true,

For some of us pervs,

This is exactly what we do.

I would love to lick another man's cum from my wife's panties. This poem really turned me on.

Don't want another man's cum, just your sweet natural juices, your hotness.

Clever, I like it!

Such a good story, and fantastic poem!

Cute and erotic! You certainly have talent writing.