All Comments on 'Please!'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
WITH WORDS OF PASSION

she jumbles your brain. TK U MLJ LV NV

DawnJDawnJalmost 12 years ago
Urgency!

It's in every line, in every demand, in the raw desire in the tone, in the raw lust in the words! For some reason, I think of Eliza Doolittle, reduced to her very purest essence, in the throes of passion, and barely remembering to enunciate correctly.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
"lifelong night "..............

.....the whole lifetime should be condensed into tonite !!!!! -----beautiful Philosophical concept . Tomorrow morn dawns 'nother lifetime ?!?!?!

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