All Comments on 'My Baby's Ass'

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mafia_patriarchmafia_patriarchover 10 years ago
The title..had to read it.

This has been a day of firsts for me, now my first erotic poem. I wouldn't exactly call this "erotic". It sounds like a rap song excerpt. Points for rhyming, but just one thing. Minx and hijinx. The word is spelled "hijinks " Hijinx isn't even a word. Probably done like that for appearances, but it still would have worked with the real spelling.

adultpoemposteradultpoemposterover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

mafia.......Thank you for your comment and pointing that out.......yes it was for effect. But i had considered changing it. Thanks again for your comment.

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