All Comments on 'Missed Communication'

by CeriseNoire

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WickedEveWickedEveabout 17 years ago
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I actually like where you're going with this--two people who both want the same thing but can't bring themselves to ask for it. "She wishes he's fuck her,/but she won't say the word./He's blush, you know." Confusing strophe. Are those "he's" suppose to be he'd?

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