All Comments on 'In the quiet of the night'

We share a moment of soulful passion. Beautiful piece Anna...very nicely done.

Hey, I'm not much on reading poetry-not because I don't like it but most of the time I just don't understand it. Still, I could feel the loneliness in this but then it wasn't a feeling of hopelessness and I think there's a big diffence. Being alone and being lonely are two different emotions and right now you seem alone but with a hope that leads me to believe you're not anticipating being lonely. Damn, I don't even understand what I'm trying to say :D

I feel the closeness you share with "him". As bearlee so aptly put it, being alone and being lonely are two different emotions, but here you convey through your eloquent pen the togetherness you've found. Although you are momentarily miles apart, in the quiet of your alone night you will never see or feel loneliness. <smile>

On behalf of the poetry side of Lit, I'd like to welcome you to the neighborhood, Anna! Your first poem {and first story} both show a high caliber of writing ability that I, for one, am very impressed with. I'm looking forward to seeing more from our Many Feathers' {My Man of Sand's} new Venus.<wink>

Vixxx

Had this one on the back burner for another look see. Feel the emotion you express of being alone. I especially like the ending, in the context of being alone —— "I smile and kiss you unseen."

enjoin your rite <winkz

is a beautiful thing, even when being apart hurts sometimes. I hope you will be joined soon! Beautiful, you move me. (xxx)