All Comments on 'Ignited by a Pinch'

by Maydaypilot

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swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingalmost 3 years ago

Oh, god, it's incredible. I'm sorry my analysis isn't deeper. But, fuck... Mmm so good.

RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 3 years ago

*fanning* Wow! *fanning some more*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

So very sensual. You have a way of making it all so intimate, making sweet love to your reader again and again. 5 wet stars.

-E

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Such open and free sexual release. And oh, the nipples…mmmhm

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Wow! Hot! Very well done….

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotalmost 3 years agoAuthor

All, Truly grateful for your encouraging feedback. The most volatile fuel for my creative fires. MP

swiftlytiltingswiftlytiltingover 2 years ago

I was re-reading your poem this morning. I wish I could give it another five stars! Ahhh. It's so fucking satisfying.

SexuallypoeticSexuallypoeticabout 2 years ago

Wow. "Slutty slide ... Harder Fucker,"

Need I say more.

Very hot. Very sexy.

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...