All Comments on 'entrance'

Anal invasion : 5-ed !!

I'm not much for rhyming, but this didn't feel forced. Interesting subject. ;)

Of all, I liked these lines best:

"an example in the art of persuasion

as her body tries to fight the invasion"

Thank you for all of the thoughtful comments <3

I know what you mean about rhymes sounding forced. I lack the skill to make free form/non-rhyming poems that roll off the tongue well.