by Maydaypilot
I don't normally bother with poetry, but this was so flowing, liquid, sensual I could almost envisage her ling there waiting for to explore her. But hey that's my girl, my special girl you should leave now. Just thought I would end my appreciation with my poor effort. 5 stars for you I make no claim for myself.
I'm not usually lost for words, but could someone hand me a cigarette please and one for my guardian angel too!! Wow! Thank You for that afternoon delight!
Such a perfect, poetic description of how one can be free from inhibitions while bound, and while giving up control.
Great how your short lines = short, excited breathing, and the imagery strikes clearly, like a bell. Lucky girl you’ve got on that bed!