All Comments on 'Empowered'

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LadyAmethystLadyAmethystalmost 3 years ago

Oh. Lovely. This one speaks to me. My new favorite of yours 💜

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Always so good. So hot. Such a treat to read one of your's. Thank you!

DevilbobyDevilbobyalmost 3 years ago

I don't normally bother with poetry, but this was so flowing, liquid, sensual I could almost envisage her ling there waiting for to explore her. But hey that's my girl, my special girl you should leave now. Just thought I would end my appreciation with my poor effort. 5 stars for you I make no claim for myself.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 3 years ago

Beautifully crafted…

raven_rose_auraven_rose_aualmost 3 years ago

I'm not usually lost for words, but could someone hand me a cigarette please and one for my guardian angel too!! Wow! Thank You for that afternoon delight!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Such a perfect, poetic description of how one can be free from inhibitions while bound, and while giving up control.

SwingadongSwingadongabout 2 months ago

Great how your short lines = short, excited breathing, and the imagery strikes clearly, like a bell. Lucky girl you’ve got on that bed!

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Older male. Natural beauty addict. I love. I feel the hard and soft, in most things. I know real and grace, and embrace them. I need to write, and strive to write well, to reach my reader. Flawed, flying blind, but still flying. I value feedback from ratings, public a...