All Comments on 'Duo'

I really enjoyed The Paradox of Polarity.

A duo of contrasts. Very interesting use of repetitions. The same enclosing lines in Limbo pronouncing the undecided mind that keeps us awake all night Long. Oh, how much I can feel that. I liked the use of the stars too. Night's starry blanket a simile for the detailed known life we've led, the morning sun like the overwhelming mass of opportunities of a yet unknown future.

On the other hand the changing word pairs to highlight the strong bond of a couple that finds analogies wherever they look.

Thanks for sharing both, the struggle and the harmony.

I particularly enjoyed the second one. Lovely.

So very beautiful!

Your poems always make me feel something, and these two were no exceptions. Thank you for sharing your prose.

do I presume ere we assume. TK U MLJ LV NV

Once again, very humbled and ever grateful. Your kind words keep me writing even if there are times when the well has literally gone dry.

Thank you ♡♡♡

These emotions have stayed with me all day and I have been compelled to read and read again: We exist in a limbo, yet we are a grafted polarity....all in the same moment.

Can I be grounded in such a fluid state? Surely, I must be.

Thank you for exploring this......wonderful!

Thank you so much ♡