All Comments on 'Daydreaming'

...the poem and the image

Small and perfectly formed, each stroke of your pen delicately defines the shape

That curves into

The smallness of your cheeks

........that get cupped inside

palm of my hands ..........

....an inveterate , unashamed Bottom lover like me can go places'n do things with this Poem of yours , Oldbear !! thank you for sharin' : 5-ed ....

There is a very big Makrocosmos in your beautiful mikrocosmos, Oldbear!

5ed

oldbear, but wonder if the final line

"to curve"

would be better breaking the pattern you set up and writing instead

"to bend"

so you have a totally different word with different sonics but a duality in meaning, bends can mean a similar thing in to curves but also has a secondary meaning to ":bending over"