All Comments on 'Coming Rains'

Could feel the disappointment, the underlying anger about the traveling eye and then even more. Very much liked the incorporation of flowers - and the open end? of seeds in the ground that might spring.

Thanks for sharing

"Love’s frail breath"

This was exquisite! Love and pain filled with such disappointment. Raw and real. Lovers angst, beautiful! It pains me I didn't write it.

I love this, as ever. The rawness and feelings in it.

Nice ending

"Seasons are ever changing,

clutching seeds in my hands

wondering if I should dare

toss them in the shifting sands. "

By all means go for it