All Comments on 'Come to My Window'

by Lyricalli

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29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Like a coloring book - a very atmospheric foreplay for the mind to fill in the following scene, and what happened before as well.

Thanks for sharing

Paul4playPaul4playabout 3 years ago

Oh my.....what a powerful image.....

PiscatorPiscatorabout 3 years ago

Our brain/imagination is our largest erogenous zone. Your poem has stimulated mine.

PiscatorPiscatorabout 3 years ago

Nice or as Tod said HOT

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I LOVED IT.

I FELT IT.

I wanted more.

Well done!

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotabout 3 years ago

Exquisitely imagined with just the right amount of sensuality and pain. Perfectly written.

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I've been writing poetry for about eight years, and it's all Lit's fault.