All Comments on 'Anxious'

Hi. Your poem was recommended on the new poems thread on the literotica poetry forum.

Really well done, Cerise. I love how you chose your line breaks, and the whole thing is remarkable, really. Witty, wry, and precise. Thanks for sharing!

It matters not if the varnish is tarnished for most see what they want to see, even when knowing they are being misled. Some even expect to be misled; sounds like only half the truth's been revealed. Another poem awaits, perhaps?

A home run, Cerise. I know guys like that (sigh).

Concise and very vivid, this piece gives a fine, accurate look into the deeper aspects of a character. Nice work.

I too have known guys like that, as well as their victims.