All Comments on 'And so I swoon. . .'

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Perhaps its the effect from reading your other piece

But this has the feel of another sub's tale;

Perhaps this is your favored genre?

Ot perhaps I'm reading too much in it and all this is,

Is simple erotic devotion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Alone

And the rest of us

All but him

Sit as you do

Alone

Pining for a woman like you

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