All Comments on 'A Submissive Confession'

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todski28todski28almost 10 years ago
Damn good stuff again

You have a talent for making a poem true to itself, and emotional conveyance,

5ed

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsalmost 10 years ago
Nice piece

Particularly like the lines, for the right man/I am prophecy. Works so well with what comes before.

JWrenJWrenalmost 10 years ago
Captivating

Submissive? Well, you have me at your feet with this offering. Superb.

MagnetronMagnetronalmost 10 years ago

Most writers usually fail to engage readers who aren't interested in sub culture.

You are not one of them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Damn...

Now THAT was just beyond fabulous. I am speechless.

PiscatorPiscatorover 9 years ago

A lovely confession

RUlookingupRUlookingupover 8 years ago
Well I guess you are a writer.

Avg.. thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

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