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by paperpoet
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Ashesh9almost 10 years agoWow !!
a Rain Poem :5-ed .
the lines:
Thunder rumbles in the distance ....
...air shakes from the sound ......
Very Realistic !!
Oldbear63almost 10 years agoI liked this
Experienced it this morning, wish I could have stopped to watch it. I am working on something similar, about a cold front, but more focused on the clouds. Nicely done.
Desejoalmost 10 years agonice image
I think you could cut out some words and make it stronger. Nice job of catching the moment, as you intended.
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