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dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
this duel....

certainly has some intense confrontations that will have to be tended too...*LOL*.....i'm particular fond of this stanza:

"Aren't you the town Poet?"

A French Rose she twirled,

like a little 'flighty' school girl.

"Yes Milady, that would be me,

is it poetry, that interests thee?

*****

nice work!!......don

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
we we we

I like artie, okay I am ready for more. How many more are there in this story? Wonderful job, Art.

S~ :)

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
**

Lady Jina has a way about her,

keeps changing the rules and the players

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Knight's play.

Duels - sword fights - defending the Lady's honor. A delightful romp back into the days Knighthood. An artfully told rendering.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
DUELING FOR YOU OWN HONOR

BUT A FALSE HONOR IS WASTED, tk u mlj lv nv

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