All Comments on 'The Adventures of Scarlet Warrior Ch. 03'

by Sucker4Boobies

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mage050mage0505 months ago

Felt very bad for the villain at the end there

SirDigbyChickenCaesarSirDigbyChickenCaesar4 months ago

Having used "counter-rape" in a story of my own, I don't condone the -principle-, but this read unexpectedly hilarious, such that I could -almost- forget Futanara is also a vicious murderer. It's a decidedly bittersweet ending: the fade-out with Ally hints the breeding imperative may be part and parcel of the equipment too, and Futanara actually being a doting mother was a gut-punch. You've set up some heady themes, and I would be interested in a sequel.

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