All Comments on 'Susan and John Ch. 01'

I went with your story, it excited me to read your words, I was able to create an image of procedings and get very aroused as I did. Well done, great write.

Straight out of Grimm's Adult Fairy Tales. I'm gonna have nightmares. Pretty funny and even a little hot in a teeth clenching kind of way...Mancelt.

GREAT WRITING!

that they are accountants? First he gambles, then he signs a paper agreeing to add the rent to the debt. Tell us where they graduated from so the world will know to avoid that place.

I'm afraid this is so implausible as to spoil the story for me

They are from India or Pakies. There the stupidity blooms !

They are from USA and got their education from public schools. No wonder why schools there sucks big time!

Result predictable.

CERTAÎNES PERSONNES NONT RIEN A FOUTRE SUR CE MAGNIFIQUE SÎTE !!! NE SAVENT ILS DONC PAS QU'ONT Y PARLES DE SEX ET SURTOUT D'ADULTÉRE !!!! QUE CES CHÎEURS LISENT PLUTOT LE MAGAZINE NOUS DEUX OU AUTRES REVUE QUI CONVIENDRAIS MIEUX A CES MÀSOS !!!!!!!!!!!

CETTE HISTOIRE EST SUBLÎME TRES EROTIQUE !!!!!! D'AILLEURS TOUTES LES HÎSTÔÎRES DE CET AUTEUR VALENT LE DÉTOUR !!!!!

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Really sick cuck shit.

26thNCuck Disapproved

Utterly ridiculous.