All Comments on 'Star-Crossed Lovers Ch. 02'

I'm loving this story and I hope you won't make your readers wait too long for the next chapter! :)

i havn't even read the story yet, though i have every confidence that it will be amazing. Just wanted to say however, thank you for releasing another bit of work. Your work is seriously publishable quality, so every time you have new work come out, well...its always amazing. i check nearly every day for new stuff, almost never comes up, when when it does, like today, in for a real treat. thank you for writing!

This ranks up with every action thriller that I've ever read! WOW! Where's Chapter 3!!!!

a culture/civilization/a race of species like humans spending more than half of its waking hours --- out side of sleeping hours and recup hours --- doing nothing but loading ammunition, lubbing mighty killing machines, and preparing to out maneuver and blow up galactic ships of "bad guys" out of the sky/in vacuum space ....... like those 1940's black and white John Wayne movies about marauding, mindless killer indians and good christianly gentle little-house-on-the-prairie type settlers and cowboys carving our a peaceful living in "virgin territories".......... the notion that such culture, such a race, such a species, such a civilization has become a space-faring one..... it is total nonsense. <p>

oh, yes, I've not forgotten: during those few hours, days, or weeks when those heroes and heroines have to replace their missing limbs with prothetics, they have star-crossed, romeo-juliet type romance, too, yes! <p>

honest to Jesus step brother, Satan, I love romance AND science fiction; and if you could blend them well, nothing beats them..... but this visuality of perpetual battles by heroic men and women for freedom, liberty, and righteouness against mindless evil doers .... it is surely no more than just vomit stuff. it is upper-elementary school mentality. upper elementary school mentality never left behind even in our grown up phases, that is... <p>

harsh story-plot criticism notwithstanding, the author HLD IS A GOOD WRITER. have read one of two his his/her stories and have found the writing, as a technical feat, enjoyable...

Another wonderful piece of writing. Please keep up the good work and do not make us wait so long for another submission.