All Comments on 'Spring Break Ch. 04'

Wow, you had my heart racing with the dance club scene, and the follow-up on the pontoon boat.

Wow.

Thank you.

this story really does get better and better. the depth of the characters is nothing less than shocking, to be honest. i keep thinking this has to have at least partly been true, but then again maybe you're just an extremely talented writer who's been to the disney parks

Fantastic. Great story telling, a cut above and I can't wait to see where these sexy, interesting people end up!

still don't know "The Invisible man's" name

And what the heck was in "the note"?

LOL

DKP

Loved the scene on the pontoon boat very fucking hot!!

I don’t like how they went from barely able to show affection in from of Leah to experienced swingers. And Melinda going off with the other girl and all three girls flirting openly with various guys. That’s not what he said their relationship between him and the girls was about.