by xelliebabex
And i was not disappointed, you write beautifully and the story is really gripping.
I look forward to the next chapter.
5 stars as always
I tried to give you five stars but the system only allowed me to click 3 :(
So I hit the back key to reset and now the screen reads 1 star :( and I can't unclick it or click more! I am distressed because you are a wonderful writer! And I love this 5 Star story!! I have no idea if the 3 or the 1 were recorded! I'm soooooo sorry but it's the website I'm sure!! :(
Can this glitch be reported please???!!
I am very happy to see more balance to Bella's character. She is more than just the shiny, sparkly unicorn of masochistic slaves-I hope. ;). Now, she needs to stop getting all scared-little-girl every time she stands up for herself. You seem to be moving her towards being a fully developed woman. Pleasepleaseplease keep going that way. Strong woman making a choice is so much better than a doormat.
I'm also glad Heckle and Jeck got called out on their prank. It was petty and just another example of all of these people yanking her around. Pranky people generally can't think beyond themselves, jerks, the lot of 'em.
Personally, not missing Mel. Only sorry we missed his head on a pike. ;D
OMG I forgot to add my Authors note thanking my proof readers, Verity and Ellie! Thank you so much guys you mean the world to me!
Thank you everyone for your comments so far I am glad you are for the most part still enjoying the series.Your comments mean so much to me and keep me tapping away on my old keyboard.
I love this story! I am also really liking the hint of interest from Stephen (I'm a romantic at heart!) It's great she is being introduced to new things, and I love reading about them - I personally can not wait to see her and Stephen together though!! Maybe more than just a hint to come??
and get your girl! I was going to say I dislike how bella seems to be a simpering victim, but as others have said, she is very appealing and a magnet to all it seems.
I've been reading your stories for quite some time now, and I was pleasantly surprised to see a new chapter. I just HAD to read this one slowly just to last me to the next one! Keep up the good work, and thank you for writing!
P.s. If you do publish these, I'll most definitely purchase them. Love it!
I patiently await ch. 07. If it seems slow to any readers, go back and start from the beginning, it makes it worth the reading.
Bella is so beautiful btw.
Thanks xelliebabex
Im always checking to see if there are new chapters up for Bella and Callie too. I love both stories. Im excited to see how things will play out with Stephen. Not sure I like Hunter, at all. He seems like an ass to me.
Cant wait for the next chapter. Thanks!
My bella muse is refusing to get on the dang boat with me and sail this next chapter home and as so many commenters have told me they would rather wait for a decent chapter than have me rush out something awful so I am asking for a little more patience than usual, I am trying to get it together but i need more muse glue.. My sincere apologies. - Ellie.
I am hooked on your story and plot. You have me craving more with each chapter. Thank you for sharing this gift with us.
I wish i could re-rate. When I first fast this story I was feeling much different. If I could I would rate all chapters 5 stars. Wonderful work, even if the grammar isn't perfect;)