All Comments on 'Mom Knows Best Ch. 03'

story started good but turned to crap quick terrible the things youd do to the person you love the most in the world cant believe how the story line dropped off im dissapointed sorry

This is how an otherwise nice story gets to be totally incredulous. The Author should not be derailed from a romantic setting even though the theme is incest by his sado-Masochist cravings. First he offers his very "loving" mother/wife to senseless gang bangs, even allowing other men to impregnate her. Then he allows a sadistic bully to humiliate her public. What a wimp! He does not make any effort to protect her but blames her for the assault on her. It is such far fetched storylines like this which make the audience unconvinced. Please confine your writtng to the loveless BDSM area