All Comments on 'His Whore Ch. 02'

Just wondering why this story is not continued? Keep in mind that readers often steal what time they can to read and do not always take the time to compose comments, at least I rarely do. However, your story leaves me with a strong desire to follow the development of this relationship. It seems obvious that they are a fit, but will he repeat the mistakes he made with Elizabeth...and would that actually be a mistake here? What are the limits they will explore, as she seems to indeed have potential as a pain slut? Give us the delicious details of Elizabeth's gradual degradation at the hands of her two new masters! This story can not die here...!

What a well told story of lust, but it needs at least 2 more chapters. Chapter 3 should detail what happens over the weekend and chapter 4 should tell how she reacts to the weekend of servitude.

Great.

Such subtlety makes it very erotic.

Keep writing!