All Comments on 'Georgie Girl Ch. 04-06'

Another good story from coaster2 and I will continue to follow your stories.

This is great reading. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story so far and am looking forward to more. Easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing.

Coaster 2, you are really on a roll!

and good place to break! Georgette sound impossibly wonderful.. But this is romance and not LW!

Been enjoying your stories, and especially this newest one.

Please keep up the good work.

Bob T.

Easily the best story I've read on this site. I must admit this is the first in this category; I've read hundreds in other categories, and was reading here trying to decide if I should post a story I'm working here or expand it and publish on Kendle.

I really think that is very possible for you also. This story WILL sell. Good luck.

You sure upped the ante! Well done!

Rarely have I felt a story deserved a "five". So far, I would happily rate this great tale a "ten".

Nearly perfect grammar, fantastic plot, great dialog and beautifully written story.

Thank you,

deJay

I was wondering how he got in after they had changed the locks and the alarm codes.

one of these stories that "our hero" doesn't get hurt seriously and wind up in the hospital? Are we so jaded that we can't enjoy a romantic story without the contrived drama?

interesting characters, prior histories. saved this as a favorite to go back and start from chapter 1. want to see John's invention become successful, wedding and future children

Useless cunt finally knocked him out with the frying pan

His thought about his shirt being damaged was oddly realistic. Having been in a few situations where my life was endangered, I can verify, the oddest thoughts have occurred.

Another great chapter!

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