All Comments on 'Butterflies'

by M. Millswan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Wow!, what prose! Thankyou for a most enjoyable read x

Many_MemoriesMany_Memoriesalmost 7 years ago
AND NOW ----

The NEXT chapter will have to be about filming the thriller with the twin sisters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
A triumphant return

Brilliant writing, from a fantastic author. Whilst inherently different to the style of Snapshot, the emotion you convey remains the same. Brilliant work

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Did you by chance write and submit this story 8+ years ago?

I swear I read a story just like this, that was just as entrancingly well-written, many years ago. It may have been as many as 10 years. I remember because I spent years after looking for it but it seemed to have disappeared off of Literotica. Could this be the same one? Would love an answer to this question as I really did spend many hours searching for it back in the day. amavit24@hotmail.com

maddictmaddictover 6 years ago
And action

I do like the shoes, our harem is growing. Dont be a stranger with your stories. A evil twin how delightful.

Yes you've left me wanting more !

Helen1899Helen1899almost 4 years ago
Wonderful

A wonderful unexpected story, I wasn't prepared to so aroused (over dressed) I never expected such intense lesbian sex from a man. God I bet he his good in bed, not many men can write a lesbian love scene like that. The whole story was so good, great imagination, so well written, never in my wildest dreams did I expect that, when I am dressed appropriately I will read another by this author, hopefully I won't be left frustrated

lowkeyonelowkeyoneover 2 years ago

THANK YOU. What a well written great little story. Description was so clear it made one fell if it was an autobiography And the content of the tale was refreshing and different.

I don't five 5's very often but you definitely deserved one.

Djmac1031Djmac1031over 2 years ago

You may just be my new favorite author. LOVE your style, not the typical fuck fest nonsense. It's what I try for in my own stories. Looking forward to reading more of your work. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot damn, that was delicious

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

its fine,,enjoyed it,,would not expect you to be a fan of Enya,,i presume its your wifes influence, lol.

RaagRaajRaagRaaj9 months ago

Wonderful and delicious!

WeatheryOneWeatheryOne8 months ago

It was fabulous, as all of your stories have been. Having read all of your stories, as well as many others on this site, I can say that you are a most talented author. You have a way with words that other authors need to learn to emulate. Without question, I enjoy your stories more than any other. Thanks for sharing your obvious talent with us and making each story wonderfully erotic and flat out entertaining. Keep these stories coming.

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Many readers have asked about where to find other stories I have written. Professionally, I write erotica under the pen name: M. Millswan. You can find all of my books, including Snap Shots (with all 3 stories) at www.farlightpress.com. I got my writing career started on Lit...